As I was on a midnight wander,
so came to my attention a little girl
standing in the moonlight.
-K. Kelly Version #One
As I was strolling down the sidewalk at ten 'o' clock,
I saw a little girl on a rock,
standing in the moonlight
--K. Kelly Version #2
As I was strolling, a midnight wander,
So came to my attention a little girl,
Standing on a boulder
and under the moonlight her face was pale,
and covered all over in ash.
So her hair hung lank and unkempt,
From her emitted a soft green glow,
as looking at her- she disappeared
- K. Kelly Finished Poem
As you can see above, I made a poem from a thing that really happened to me, into a kind of ghost story. I was walking down our sidewalk at 10 o clock, then saw Lil sister Lucy walking ahead of me. When the moonlight shone on her head, I foolishly imagined a ghost. But when I heard her singing, all my doubts were ceased.
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2 months ago
Hey that is pretty good! Amazing vocabulary and style, Kelly!
ReplyDeleteWow, you think so? I didn't think it was that good.
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